#Tanka Tuesday (1/2/18): Ordinary Grace–a #tankaprose #haibun…#poetry #haiku

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An alchemic drive

to transform this fallen world

into paradise

how many moments of Grace

missed in the ordinary?

 

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We almost don’t recognize each other. Her near-pixie cut hair and blue lipstick, and my ever-growing beard, conspire to conceal us. A moment later, we exchange our excited greetings. My former student sits in an office chair behind the school’s main office desk. Her nearly one-and-a-half-year-old daughter sits on it. She says she’s studying to become a midwife.

A midwife! She witnesses the punchline of the old joke, “If you want to make God laugh, tell him your plans!” For how could an unwed, teenage mother so pull her life together? Isn’t that what society at large would say? Grace had other plans!

 

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beloved animals

I walk my dog one last time

before her giveaway

even a heartbroken boy’s

love is ordinary grace

 

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for dVerse’s Tuesday Poetics (Grace),

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge #65 (Synonyms of ambition, change),

Kiwinana’s Weekly Tanka Prompt Challenge–week 78 (animals and love), and

Real Toads Tuesday Platform.

 

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45 responses to “#Tanka Tuesday (1/2/18): Ordinary Grace–a #tankaprose #haibun…#poetry #haiku”

  1. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    Ouch, I was so stoked about the student’s transformed life and dreams, and then heartbroken over the boy losing his dog. Your words touch the heart.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      And yet Grace abounds in both circumstances! Thanks, Sherry!

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  2. kanzensakura Avatar

    And now I am incredibly curious…who is the boy and why is the dog being given away?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      A tale for another time…😉

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      🙂 Thanks, Dwight!

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  3. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    It is often the case: “Grace had other plans!”

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, Frank. Thanks!

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  4. Vivian Zems Avatar

    Grace in all things dark and uncomfortable; a fallen world, a boy’s heart-cry. Loved the tankas. By the way, what’s happening to the dog? 😦

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Vivian. As for the dog…’tis a tale for another time. 😉

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      1. Vivian Zems Avatar

        You’re welcome! I hope the tale’s a happy one😊. I love dogs❤

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  5. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Who is the boy and why is the dog being given away? I have soo many questions! Great write! 🙂

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa. The full story of the boy and his dog is a tale for another time. 😉

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  6. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Both touching poems, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jane. Technically, the poem is a tanka-prose–like a haibun, but with tanka instead of haiku. I used two tanka in this one. 🙂

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        It’s a very successful poetic rendering.

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  7. paul scribbles Avatar

    Delightful renditions that carry a wisdom within. Thanks Frank.

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Maybe parting with a beloved pet can learn the boy sometimes… wonderful

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  9. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Frank, this is some of your BEST work. It’s emotional and hits you in the gut! My kind of poetry! Well done! ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen! I appreciate it!

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        I mean it! Wow!

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  10. ladynyo Avatar

    Heartbreaker, Frank.

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  11. Charley Avatar

    Indeed. Grace exists where we overlook it as well as in the intentional grace-filled moments. Both poems startlingly brilliant.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Charley! It’s technically one poem, a Tanka-prose, with two Tanka. I’m happy you liked it! 😀

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      1. Charley Avatar

        I did, indeed!

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  12. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    I enjoyed each section of this.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Rosemary!

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  13. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Warm, heartfelt poems, Frank.

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  14. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    For me this was a roller coaster ride of emotions. But it is so true–grace found in the ordinary…that requires a heck of a lot of awareness.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, Victoria! It requires the three “greats” espoused by zen: “Great Faith. Great Doubt. Great Determination.” Thanks for reading! 😀

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  15. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    I am a Catholic Christian, but oh how I love to incorporate Eastern viewpoints such as Zen into my own practice of faith. I’ve got to write these three down and “digest” them. Thanks.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      I, too, am a Catholic Christian with an appreciation for philosophical Taoism and zen. Not to mention a love of Contemplative prayer. 😄

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  16. nosaintaugustine Avatar

    I like your wording of the “alchemic drive to transform.” Nice haibun!

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