#Tanka Tuesday (1/9/18): Low Winter Sun …an Ekphrastic #tankaprose…#haiku #poetry #photo

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“low winter sun” by Sharnon Knight

“low winter sun”

a pathfinder’s way

ends at home

fresh snow and bare trees

a welcome sight

We swore we passed the same farmhouse. Weather-worn, with a silo near the barn, and perhaps a shed set back in the same, full field. Each one lay along a state road in Vermont, out of Vergennes, on the way to Stowe during the pre-GPS days. We traveled up there for a weekend hiking with the Appalachian Mountain Club then.

Years later, we would take that route again, this time on our way home from Smuggler’s Notch, just north of Stowe. Somehow, those farmhouses looked no older than before.

winter field

so little light left

to resist the dark

afternoon shadows swallow

a snow-covered propane tank

for dVerse Poets Pub–Poetics, hosted by Mish

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41 responses to “#Tanka Tuesday (1/9/18): Low Winter Sun …an Ekphrastic #tankaprose…#haiku #poetry #photo”

  1. erbiage Avatar

    This really got me: farmhouses looked no older than before

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Agree with Eric… somehow the way the farmhouse doesn’t change really… there is a comfort there.

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  3. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    What a lovely Haibun. Isn’t it funny how some places never change and seem to stay the same? Or… is it our perceptions? ❤

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  4. Sharon Avatar

    Yes… the landscape only gives background to the steadfast structures.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sharon! And thank you for your photo!

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  5. Waltermarks Avatar

    Reblogged this on Poetry and Prose and commented:
    Your haiku is inspiring. It takes me back to those country days

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks so much for the reblog! 😀

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  6. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    The lines about the afternoon shadows swallowing the snow-covered propane tank just popped out at me. An example of the eye of a poet.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Victoria! 😀

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  7. nosaintaugustine Avatar

    You capture that feeling of relief and comfort of arriving home, or to a place that has a home in one’s memory. Very nice!

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    Beautiful. I love “a pathfinder’s way ends at home.”

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  9. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Old farmhouses reach an age when they never seem to age further.

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  10. Elizabeth Avatar

    Great poem, you describe the photo perfectly!

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  11. coalblack Avatar

    Frank, your recent comment kindly left at my Shay’s Word Garden blog was sent, for some reason, to the spam comments by Blogger. (Toni Spencer’s comment did as well.) I’ve straightened it out now.

    I am not much for haiku as you know, but great photograph and love the Clannad as well. 🙂

    –coal (Fireblossom)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Shay, although technically the first and third “stanzas” are Tanka, the modern name for the older Waka. The photographer runs a great photo blog, worth checking out. Thanks for reading! 😀

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  12. Mish Avatar

    There is a nostalgic feel to this. I like the idea of the farmhouses holding up to the weathering of time.
    Thanks for joining in, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Mish, for your kind words and for going above and beyond hosting!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thank you!

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  13. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) Avatar

    Oh, this takes me back home to the gravel roads and snow covered farmland of my youth.

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  14. Rommy Avatar

    Charming farm houses in Vermont during the winter – they are a beautiful sight

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  15. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    You are a master of these short Japanese forms, Frank. Beautiful images.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Jane! I appreciate this high praise! 😀

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        Well deserved 🙂

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  16. kim881 Avatar

    I agree with Bjorn and Eric about the farmhouses – the shed or barn the picture seems stable and comforting – ‘a welcome sight’. I love how you captured the shadows and how the snow makes an ordinary propane tank unusual and beautiful in the final tanka.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Kim! 😀

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  17. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    ‘the dark afternoon shadows swallow a snow-covered propane tank’… this is so powerful!

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  18. rothpoetry Avatar

    I loved your poem and your story. The dark winters days with the hazy sun really creates a wonderful affect!
    Dwight

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  19. alisonhankinson Avatar

    I like the way you had passed by twice and the building seemed the same- I liked -a pathfinder’s way ends at home, so often we revisit a place only to find that some of the differences are so great that our memory is barely recognisable.

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  20. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Lovely, Frank, and you are right. The farmhouses never seem to change.

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  21. memadtwo Avatar

    Definitely timeless…and it also looks like home. A beacon in the dusk. (K)

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