Here. Now. Just This. A #haibun in the moment

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One robin sings in spite of nightfall. A distant hum of some appliance drones outside. The stairs creak under Mira’s footsteps. The ledge of the Wall-unit desk has fewer chakas on them. My own tired eyes and enshadowed crows’ feet gaze at me from the mirror enclosed by the unit. A tenitial hum in my ears persist.

 

Another breath. More taps on an Acer keyboard, as life unfolding becomes distilled by linguistic craft into this prose. The soar lower lumbar, the disjointing numbness at the shoulder and hip sockets, the tingling sensation like ants crawling back and forth of my lower arms and legs–it’s all there.

 

The “Viana” clock–a wedding gift from Mira’s former employer (and our current dentist)–strikes quarter after eight. Another yawn. So many sensations in so few moments, in this time after dinner and before bed. This time for which we work hard each day of the week.

 

April evening

a rumble in the sky

from a passing jet

how we draw our pleasures

from these supple hours

 

 

for Real Toads’ Write Here. Write Now, Paul Scribbles hosting

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 80, GATHER & SOFT, #SynonymsOnly

#GloPoWriMo2018 / NaPoWriMo2018  18/30

 

NaPoWriMo 2018

 

 

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23 responses to “Here. Now. Just This. A #haibun in the moment”

  1. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    So well described, Frank, the comfort of those after work hours. There are never enough of them.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, Sherry. Thanks! 😀

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  2. kanzensakura Avatar

    “These supple hours”….wonderful turn of phrase in this!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Toni! 😀

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  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar

    Gosh, you packed a lot in there! I particularly love “supple hours”.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Rosemary! 😀

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  4. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is such a poignant write, Frank! 💜

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa! 😀

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    These are the hours we all need… maybe the reason for being

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  6. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Excellent, Haibun/Tanka, Frank. ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen. I should have tagged it as a Tanka-prose! 😆

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  9. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    I remember looking at the clock more frequently toward the end of a workday. Yes, the after dinner hours… We can forget about the next day for a little while. Nice tanka-prose, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Miriam! 😀

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      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        You’re welcome, Frank. 🙂

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! 😀

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  10. Ben, Munro buddy and budding dog-poet Avatar

    What a lot of reflections sparingly described and wrapped up within ‘these supple hours’, wonderful.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Ben! 😀

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  11. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Funny how many things you can notice in silence. Love your haiku.

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