Humble Truths: a #TankaTuesday (on a Wednesday) #TankaProse

Doodletown_orientation_sign

 

 

fluttering leaves

in a cool afternoon breeze

a neighbor’s drumming

such a happy fantasia

of how things could have been

 

The truth is a six-mile-plus hike along the Doodletown Bridal Path in Bear Mountain State Park on Memorial Day–the same day as my late father’s birthday. The truth is the slow opening of heart and spirit to the rhythm of robin, sparrow, and finch songs that arise from the enclosing woods. The truth is it’s been seven birthdays without him, and some days are harder than others, even now. The truth is I miss him, as much of a pain in the ass as he often was.

 

leaf-blower’s drone

the backyard’s natural charm

interrupted

Still, the woosh of the wind

and sway of leaf-heavy boughs

 

 

for COLLEEN’S WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 86, FANTASY & MERRY, #SYNONYMSONLY

Kiwinana’s #Weekly Tanka Prompt #Poetry Challenge – Week 99 – Natural & Charm

Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Truth (posted by Susan)

With Real Toads’ Tuesday Platform (imagined by Rommy)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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17 responses to “Humble Truths: a #TankaTuesday (on a Wednesday) #TankaProse”

  1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Frank! This was an emotional read for me. Wow! I love your honesty and the depth of feelings. ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen! I appreciate it! 🙂

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        Thank you, Frank!

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  2. kiwinana Avatar

    Thanks, once again, wonderful write including all those prompts together. Have a great week.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Elsie! 🙂

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  3. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    We never stop missing those who have gone on. A beautiful write. And it must have been a wonderful hike, too.

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  4. merrildsmith Avatar

    Beautiful and poignant, Frank.

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  5. Rommy Avatar

    Grief insidiously works its way in during the most commonplace of moments. Even if we have been grief’s unwilling host on and off for years, we still can be surprised when it comes around.

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  6. Susan Avatar
    Susan

    How the replication of top and bottom, changed, deepened the inner truth of the heart. Our senses are true to our emotions, and loss echoes for a long, long time. I got lost in your poem in the best way.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Susan! I’m glad you enjoyed it! 🙂

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  7. purplepeninportland Avatar

    ‘the sway of leaf-heavy boughs’ – What beautiful imagery and meaning in this. My father used to take us up to Bear Mountain when we were kids. I loved it.

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  8. thotpurge Avatar

    The truth reflected in the absence and memories … poignant write…

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  9. oldegg Avatar

    Regardless of a relative’s idosyncracies we still miss them when gone because they were a part of us which is now gone forever and life’s clock ticks louder in ones ear.

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  10. annell4 Avatar

    As each leaves, the world is changed, lonelier.

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  11. hypercryptical Avatar
    hypercryptical

    A very emotional read for me too Frank – your beautiful words and thoughts pure poetry.
    Anna :o]

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  12. Sumana Roy Avatar

    Truth is ecstasy and agony as well. Nicely said.

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