Praesentia via Negativa: A #TankaProse

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Declining sun

evening robin songs

as leaves flutter

what merit our anguish

when our stake remains lost?

 

Not in the consuming lava that leaves hundreds homeless in its unpitying wake. Not in the tremors and aftershocks that follow the earthquake. Not in the bluster of egos that seek proof of their pride in apocolyptic threats, followed by magnanimous gestures. Not in the weariness of everyday life that slowly bares us all to the ground

 

No, not in any of these.

 

But only in the small, still voice. So often unheard. If heard, then so often not listened to. If heard and listened to, then so often ignored. That small, still voice, speaking in whispers louder than thunder, softer than newborn skin. That small, still voice, ever present in the heart of heartbreak, as life itself yields, through suffering, to death…

 

…and to new life beyond.

 

centuries passing

the rounded tops of once-

-pointed mountains

our celebrations passing

so quickly before our eyes

 

 

for dVerse Poets’ MTB: Via Negativa (pubtended by Bjorn)

COLLEEN’S WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 87, “CARE & SHARE,” #SYNONYMSONLY

Kiwinana’s FINAL #Weekly Tanka Prompt #Poetry Challenge – Week 100 – Celebrations & Century

 

 

 

 

 

 

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14 responses to “Praesentia via Negativa: A #TankaProse”

  1. rothpoetry Avatar

    Life is too short to anguish over what is already lost! I like that!
    dwight

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  2. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    Frank, this is so beautifully written. Too many beautiful lines to quote. I love it.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sherry! 😀

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  3. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Dwell in the past, and it becomes the present. Leaves little time for enjoying life. Wonderful, Frank.

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love this.. the two pieces of prose seems to say that death is more silent than disasters… even small hands can strangle.

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  5. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice phrase: “bluster of egos that seek proof of their pride in apocolyptic threats”

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Frank! 🙂

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  6. Lona Gynt Avatar

    Faith, hope, so lovely

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  7. Sarah Russell Avatar

    Love the form here, Frank. Not sure I’ve seen a tanka followed by prose and then another tanka. I was taken by both the form and the message. Well done.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah! The form is my adaptation of the tanka-prose, a poem analogous to the haibun.

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      1. Sarah Russell Avatar

        Yes, I’d seen that done with haiku, but never with the tanka. Nice work!

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