Conflicting Silence: A #TankaTuesday (7/31/18) #TankaProse

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The sun tries to break through. The clouds that gathered will not scatter. A temperature more consistent with spring than summer holds steady. It was perfect weather to repair the paver stones on the front stoop, or write outside all morning. I did neither, becoming lost in folly on the internet.

 

And so the usual chorus of condemnatory voices arises from my enflamed conscience, stifiling the sounds around me. I do hear the neighborhood dogs barking, the companion insects to the cicadas chirping, the rustle of leaves, the acceleration of a distant engine with the tailpipe cut. But I hear them through the troubled silence I erect to shroud away all my “should haves…” and “should not haves…”

 

Such a contrived silence is so different from the natural one that speaks through every utterance of nature. That lifegiving silence will nourish any that listen.

 

I wait to be one of them again.

 

 

high summer breeze

the ecstatic moment seeing

 a summer flower

the mournful next moment

when the petals wilt away

 

 

for dVerse Poets Tuesday Poetics: Sounds of Silence (guest pubtended by Dwight Roth)

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 95, “Happy & Morose,” #SynonymsOnly

Real Toads’ Tuesday Platform

 

 

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40 responses to “Conflicting Silence: A #TankaTuesday (7/31/18) #TankaProse”

  1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Tempus fugit…

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love how you try to find that other silence.. the one of air rather than the smothering kind. The tanka is just lovely.

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  3. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    WOW!! This is so good in so many ways, Frank. I love the analogy of time frittering away and how a rose loses its bloom. I shared these moments with you through your poetry. Excellent. ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen! I appreciate that! 🙂

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        Well deserved! 😉❤️

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  4. Glenn Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn Buttkus

    Killer tanka. You snagged me at /the natural one that speaks through the utterance of nature/. When any of us creative folks spend too much time in the nation of Procrasti, there will be hell to pay.

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  5. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Good point: “Such a contrived silence is so different from the natural one that speaks through every utterance of nature.”

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks, Frank!

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  6. Suzanne Avatar
    Suzanne

    The silence of being online is a weird kind of silence. The wabi sabi feel of your tanka reflects that.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Suzanne! 😀

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  7. Grace Avatar

    I love that silence from nature, not the contrived one ~ And your tanka covers seamlessly from joyful blooming to mourning ~

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Grace! 😀

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  8. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    I relate to this poem so much. Day follows day. I procrastinate. Your lines about nature resonate in my heart.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sherry! I’m happy that you enjoyed it and grateful that you can relate! 😀

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  9. Carrie V. H. Avatar

    Beautiful words and a beautiful photo Frank!!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Carrie! 😀

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  10. rothpoetry Avatar

    I love the way our write seems to me like a confession admitting to not measuring up to those silent voices implanted in our heads telling us what we should do. You said it all in your poem. The flower blooms and withers and we don’t hear a sound! I really like this down to earth approach.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Dwight! 😀

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  11. Mary (tqhousecat) Avatar

    I love this whole thing, especially the tanka at the end. The silence of the flowers blooming and wilting..

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  12. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    Silence is so hard to find, when the mind will not surrender. Exquisite!

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  13. Magaly Guerrero Avatar

    There is so much sorrow in that closing… in the way the now can barely be enjoyed because they are overshadowed by the wilting to come.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Magaly! The moment passes so quickly, doesn’t it?

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  14. Vandana Sharma Avatar

    The beauty of the flower will stay in memories and will be cherished always.

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  15. Ron. Avatar

    And ~that’s~ how it’s done. Salute!

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  16. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    I love the analogy of time in this one and how a rose ends up losing its bloom. Beautifully poignant 💖

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa! 😀

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  17. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Ditto to these other commenters. You wrote for many and wrote it well.

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  18. […] week, I’ve chosen Frank Tassone, from his blog, Frank J. Tassone, and his Haibun/Tanka poem called, “Conflicting […]

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Wow, Colleen! Thank you! I’m honored! 😀

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  19. Vashti Q Avatar

    Hi Frank! Lovely tanka! This is why we have to be present in the moment and enjoy, before it withers. 😉

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, Vashti! Thank you! 🙂

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  20. […] week, I’ve chosen Frank Tassone, from his blog, Frank J. Tassone, and his Haibun/Tanka poem called, “Conflicting […]

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