Human Foibles: A #TankaTuesday (8/28/18) #tankaprose #2

air air pollution climate change dawn
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Bad news kicks his shoes off on a supersonic flight. He sips champagne in business class and laughs his ass off. “They still don’t get it,” he mutters aloud to no one, “Practice makes progress, but the wankers won’t even raise their arses to fart!”

 

Meanwhile, the smoke spews more carbon into the over-carbonated air. But so what? The right people doubt this is a problem. The show must go on and does, well past the point where the last of the audience started snoring. The fires burn, the air swelters, the water either dries up or drowns. The hangover after the party has begun, but somehow someone opens the next bottle.

 

Nevertheless, what goes around comes around, and Karma is a bitch with a brickbat. After a whole lot of skull-thumping, she’ll catch the last supersonic on layover out. Soon she’ll clank champagne classes with Bad News, and they’ll laugh their asses off together.

 

Climate change

the quest for energy

leaves this Earth in ruins

when are we going

to grow up?

 

 

for dVerse Poets Poetics: Twisted Adages  (pubtended by Jilly)

Kiwinana’s #Weekly Tanka Prompt #Poetry Challenge – Week 111 – Climate & Energy

Real Toads’ The Tuesday Platform (imagined by Sanaa Rizvi)

 

 

 

 

 

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23 responses to “Human Foibles: A #TankaTuesday (8/28/18) #tankaprose #2”

  1. jillys2016 Avatar

    Strongly worded writing, Frank. Glad you joined in!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jilly! Great prompt! 😀

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  2. kiwinana Avatar

    Nicely written, one day I hope someone will get the message. Thanks, appreciate your input.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      My pleasure, Elsie. Thank you! 🙂

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  3. qbit Avatar

    Wow, strong and clear writing. Good merger of all the prompts! Well done.

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  4. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar

    I enjoyed the wise-cracking prose, reminiscent of Raymond Chandler. Then the tanka is deadly serious, and I do mean deadly. Points well made!.

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  5. rothpoetry Avatar

    I like the way you wove the adages together and followed up with a great poem calling for a sense of responsibility in the world.

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  6. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    “when are we going to grow up?” Indeed.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Truly! Thanks! 😀

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  7. Reena Saxena Avatar

    If at all we survive to grow up ….

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  8. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Wow! ❤ I m still catching my breath here .. the prose is nothing short of inspirational and that tanka hits hard .. like a punch in the gut.. when are we going to learn .. indeed! 😊

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa! 🙂

      Like

  9. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    Oh! That prose is damn good — so reflective of the collective mindset, and the tanka provides a well-rounded summation of the same. When indeed are we going to grow up? Very well-penned.
    -HA

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  10. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    It seems like the problem will all center around water. Interesting adage: “practice makes progress”

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  11. Janice Avatar

    The prose is especially superb with a nice play (double take) in the tanka.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Janice! 🙂

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  12. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    The show must go on… it’s like dancing on the edge of a cliff.

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  13. katiemiafrederick Avatar

    Smoke
    And
    Mirror
    Humans now
    Never Seeing What they Do…
    to:
    From:
    LiFe aLL..:)

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  14. Glenn Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn Buttkus

    Clever merging of the two prompts–and there is a kind of Mickey Spillane feel to the prose. I would have liked it even more if the adages had been more twisted; smile.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Ha! Thanks! I’ll take a Mickey Spillane comparison any day! 🙂

      Like

  15. lillian Avatar

    Unique take on the prompt! I was so drawn into the first section….loved the conversation!

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