A Moment of Charity: A #TankaTuesday (on a Wednesday) 9/5/18 #TankaProse

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skyscraper sunset

the outstretched reaching hands

left empty

Why despise charity when

it’s the greatest remaining?

 

I walked out of the grocers and into the dark. An indigent woman that mumbled incomprehensibly sat just within light of the store. Overcome by an inexplicable urge, I gave the woman a grapefruit. She uttered, “Oh, thank you!” A mysterious joy filled me as her hands clasped my meager gift.

 

Why should giving away one grapefruit trigger such sudden contentment? Years later, I wonder why I didn’t give her every bag that I had purchased.

 

I could easily have been the one yearning for such mercy.

 

moonrise

ever mindful of the hope

that doesn’t fail

“If you want to keep it,

you have to give it away.”

 

 

for Colleen’s Help Me Celebrate our 100th Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge! (outstretched, charity)

#Weekly Tanka Prompt #Poetry Challenge – Week 112 – Hope & Observing (mindful for observing)

Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Charity (posted by Susan)

 

 

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32 responses to “A Moment of Charity: A #TankaTuesday (on a Wednesday) 9/5/18 #TankaProse”

  1. kiwinana Avatar

    As usual, excellence post. Have a great day.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Elsie! 🙂

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  2. kanzensakura Avatar

    Who knows? Maybe to her it represented the sun?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Perhaps! Thanks, Toni! 🙂

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  3. oldegg Avatar

    No wonder they look sad as they are the forgotten people that no one wants to see. Excellent post.

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  4. susanstoo Avatar

    Less is more at times–one grapefruit is perfect this once–and then there will be more occasions. I love how your final tanka completes the circuit of giving and getting.

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  5. Sumana Roy Avatar

    “I could easily have been the one yearning for such mercy.”….If we remember this life becomes much easier to live. Nice.

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  6. gillena cox Avatar
    gillena cox

    Very telling write. I particularly luv the second tanka, Frank

    Much💗love

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  7. thotpurge Avatar

    If you want to keep it,
    you have to give it away.”
    So true … it’s a lottery which side of the empty bowl we find ourselves..

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    I love this. It reminds me of a winter day when I saw two homeless men sitting on the sidewalk. There was a tarp beside them. As I reached across to hand them a bill, a big dog stuck his head out from under the tarp, sniffing what I offered, likely HOPING it was some food. He was so beautiful, with such a hard life. I went back next day with more money to ask them to buy him food, but they had moved on.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Great story, Sherry! Thanks! 😀

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  9. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Wow, Frank. I really loved this. I loved your philosophical meanderings in your prose. This is such a great message and I often re-examine my thoughts like this too. To put it into poetry is pure genius. Lots of emotion in this piece. ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      ❤️ Thank you, Colleen for your kind words.

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        I’m seeing a new depth to your poetry. It’s fabulous. You deserve the recognition! ❤️

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  10. Carrie Van Horn Avatar

    This is lovely and and is a beautiful reflection of your heart. Giving to others can be the greatest reward we give ourselves.

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  11. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    It is a gift to the giver to be able to give things away.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! 😀

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  13. Vashti Q Avatar

    Hello Frank! Wonderful message and beautiful poetry. Great post! 😀

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Vashti! 😀

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  14. wandasncredible Avatar

    “Why should giving away one grapefruit trigger such sudden contentment? Years later, I wonder why I didn’t give her every bag that I had purchased.” This was such a profound statement it makes you want to cry. I often go over my thoughts like this and wonder. As I grow more seasoned I aspire to wonder less and do more. Thank you for this post. God bless you.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! I’m happy you enjoyed it! 😀

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