Hawk Dual: a Gunslinger’s Initiation (a #TankaTuesday #TankaProse 10/2/18)

What was it like for young Roland Deschain to face his mentor Cort armed only with David? What was it like to battle for mastery, risking exile, using one of “God’s own gunslinger?”

A screech. A flash of sunlight off talons that claw flesh off bone. The answering smack of wood against feathers and bones. And the torrent of a young apprentice’s punches against and old teacher’s face.

Until the words the son of Stephan Deschain battled to hear:

“I yield, Gunslinger”

floating leaves

a hawk snatches a squirrel

off the lawn

the cherry-burst light

of a mountain sunset

a Tanka-Prosaic retelling of a story from Stephen King’s The Dark Tower: the Gunslinger Born

For Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge (Hawk and sunset)

Real Toads’ Tuesday Platform (imagined by Willow_Switches Pat)

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12 responses to “Hawk Dual: a Gunslinger’s Initiation (a #TankaTuesday #TankaProse 10/2/18)”

  1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Frank, I really like this. What exactly is a Tanka-Prosaic? Is it like a Haibun? Fabulous prose and my brain burst with pleasure at these words: “…the cherry-burst light of a mountain sunset.”

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Tanka-prosaic is my trademarked (TM) adjective form of Tanka-prose, a prose-poem followed by a tanka. I’m happy you enjoyed it. Thank you! 😀

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        Very cool Frank. Can you explain how it differs from a Haibun/Tanka for example? If the form is trademarked can other people use it?

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      2. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        😆 I’m just joking about the trademark! No one I know of has used tanka-prosaic, but tanka-prose is a long-used term. The journal Haibun Today publishes Tanka-prose (TP) along with haibun, for example. The difference between TP and haibun is that haibun include haiku, while TP includes tanka.

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      3. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        LOL! You got me with the trademark! How interesting. I was always taught that you could write a Haibun with Haiku or Tanka. I see the distinction with the Tanka/Prose. Thanks for explaining. 😀 ❤

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  2. Kestril Trueseeker Avatar
    Kestril Trueseeker

    One of these days I will read that series! The vividness of the images you presented piqued my interest.

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  3. kanzensakura Avatar

    An interesting re-telling of King’s story. This puts me in mind of Glenn Butkus’ Cinema-whatever he posts every other Thursday at dVerse.

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    This is great retelling and makes me want to read the short story… the reference to David caught my eye.

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  5. Pat: willow88switches Avatar
    Pat: willow88switches

    I used to be a huge King fan, way back in the day …. so long ago then, but eventually found he drifted into “formula” … and so, whether it was because I overdosed on his words, or whether he lost his mojo, I drifted away. And so I can’t speak to the reference story at all … but what I get, more or less, is some very interesting images coming to mind in your poem/piece. That epic battle of David and Goliath and the endless struggle that often unfolds with master and apprentice – so yes, I walk away with an “epic battle” scene in my head – one that is bloody for the feathers and wood … a clash to be sure … and then the tanka offers the “natural” version – nature’s way as events unfold – as they will – because it just is – even if it is often a bit harrowing.

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  6. […] Hawk Dual: a Gunslinger’s Initiation (a #TankaTuesday #TankaProse 10/2/18) – Frank J. Tassone […]

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen! 😀

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  7. Vashti Q Avatar

    I’m a huge Stephen King fan so I loved it. 😉

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