Phoenix Song: a #TankaTuesday (11/27/18) #TankaProse

Bertuch-fabelwesen.JPG: Friedrich Johann Justin Bertuch (1747-1822)derivative work: Tsaag Valren [Public domain], via Wikimedia Commons

  

Long past time

to put this chill in the past

gather the pyre

ignite the consuming blaze

that restores the life taken

  

The first crackles of flame yield a tendril of smoke. The fire grows, feasting on the dry kindling and tinder wound through dry wood. It won’t take long.

 

I hear a sigh, and realize it’s mine. How long I’ve stood vigil, this time. Long enough to witness Elizabeth the Virgin Queen celebrate the Armada’s defeat, and the Bard take London by storm. To see English colonies become American states, then the nation dubbed the world’s last superpower. To hear peasants ballads marry children-of-slaves’ blues, and birth Rock-n-Roll, Rhythm-n-Blues, and Hip-Hop.

 

Long enough to see centuries of war, with no end in sight. To know that the open heart and mind of mindful men and women alone can usher in the transformation the world so desperately needs. To understand how long until such a Renaissance occurs.

  

I tire. This vigil is enough. So come, funeral fire! Bear me away, that I may arise anew to resume my vigil.

 

Only this time, with all the hope and vigor only the young possess.

 

Consuming fire

the last cries fall silent

as the ambers glow

out of the ashes I rise

secure again in new life

  

for Colleen’s WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 112, “COLD & SAFE,” #SYNONYMSONLY

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34 responses to “Phoenix Song: a #TankaTuesday (11/27/18) #TankaProse”

  1. jillys2016 Avatar

    Great voice – love the perspective in this, Frank!

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  2. thotpurge Avatar

    There’s comfort in that the phoenix will always rise from the ashes- again!

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  3. qbit Avatar

    Love the way it starts and ends with the Phoenix and it’s death and rebirth.

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  4. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    There is so much strength in this, Frank–it commands attention. I really like this line:

    know that the open heart and mind of mindful men and women alone can usher in the transformation the world so desperately needs.

    I hope so.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Me, too. Thank you, Victoria! 😀

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  5. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar Avatar
    Margaret Elizabeth Bednar

    Enjoyed the prose …

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  6. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    Wow – powerful!

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  7. strawberry volcano Avatar

    “Only this time, with all the hope and vigor only the young possess.”

    Right on. I’m down for some of that. 🙂

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  8. Gina Avatar

    i can resonate with the last line Frank, to be secure in a new life one walks through fire, be burned, reduced to ashes and rise with humility

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Gina! 😀

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  9. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    A lovely Phoenix narrative, the vigil that goes on and on tracing histories and awaiting consumption and therefore renewal.
    This to me sounds vivacious and strong: “Only this time, with all the hope and vigor only the young possess.”

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  10. Rob kistner Avatar

    You have an oversll positive tone to this thst is appealing, would that the phoenix rise again…

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks! 😀

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  11. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like the thought of a consuming blaze that restores.

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  12. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Wow, Frank. This is a fabulous retelling of the rise of the Phoenix. Well done!! ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! 😀

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  13. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Love the perspective… the voice of the flame… the pyre…

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  14. Charmed Chaos Avatar

    Love, love, love this Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Linda! 😀

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  15. katiemiafrederick Avatar

    Phoenix Emotions…
    All Colors We SoaR…New
    Ocean Whole Waves Fire..
    AShe’s Left Dust oF BookS Old..:)

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  16. Pat: willow88switches Avatar
    Pat: willow88switches

    a re-telling of the Phoenix … and rather encompassing, – the voice of the narrator is interesting, suitably unidentified, which makes me wonder if it’s a deity or someone who has reincarnated or re-birthed many times — interesting way to have pursued this topic. 🙂

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Pat! I appreciate your thoughtful feedback! 😀

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      1. Pat: willow88switches Avatar
        Pat: willow88switches

        you’re welcome … I really like the way you approached this … it’s effective and certainly lends itself well to the story!

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  17. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) Avatar

    Oh how I wish I could rise from the fire and see a world much better than it was before the match strike.

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  18. Jim Avatar
    Jim

    I liked the call to enlist the young, with their vigor. The tanka worked well for you
    ..

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  19. kanzensakura Avatar

    What an amazing poem Frank! I like how you start and end the narrative with the death and rising of the Phoenix. One of your best.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Toni! I appreciate that! 😀

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! 😀

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