Sorrowful Release: a solo #renga

Crescent

moon-blown ripples

on evening tide

how these tear-culled thoughts

arise each brightening night

First Quarter

a scythe-eyed glimps across

an empty road

how this dust-tongued mouth forms

the right word at the wrong time

Gibbous

a bell-voiced cry

no one hears

how one dark-vowelled word

ends a measure of joy

Full Moon

a tide-looped April walk

drying tears

how a heaven-circling hope

comes from letting go

for dVerse Poets’ Poetics: love the words (guest pubtended by Laura Bloomsbury)

#NaPoWriMo2019 / GloPoWriMo2019 16/30

WD April PAD 2019 16/30

My own current Haikai Challenge

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16 responses to “Sorrowful Release: a solo #renga”

  1. Ennle Madresan Avatar
    Ennle Madresan

    WOWWWWWW.

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  2. Grace Avatar

    A lovely renga, ending on a hopeful note Frank.

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  3. areadingwriter Avatar

    oh myyyyy. from melancholic to a glint of hope. the last two lines took my breath away.

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  4. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:

    #Haiku Happenings #3: my latest solo #renga for my own current #haikai challenge! 😉

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  5. Laura Bloomsbury Avatar

    Frank you have taken Wales to the Orient and kept the spirit so beautifully – superb use of the prompt and now I shall always see the Gibbous moon as:
    “a bell-voiced cry
    no one hears”

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Laura, for your kind feedback! 😀

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  6. kim881 Avatar

    Your renga is delightful, Frank! I enjoyed all the sounds and movement.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Kim! 😀

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    What a great renga on the cycle of the moon, and maybe something more hopeful in the fulfillment in the light of the full moon.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Bjorn! 😀

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  8. ShirleyB Avatar

    Loved this.particularly –
    ‘how this dust-tongued mouth forms
    the right word at the wrong time’

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  9. msjadeli Avatar

    I imagine a lonely soul, taking nightly walks, moon as companion, drowning in sorrow, finally releasing hope to the mercy of a kind “overseer.” It’s an intimate portrait of sorrow that took skill to compose.

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  10. Jules Avatar

    A reminder to think before speaking. Hoping for forgiveness…
    Love the photo of the moonglade (which by the way is a real word).

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jules! 😀

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  11. jazzytower Avatar

    I like how the set includes all phases of the moon…I like the hope I feel especially when I read the last two. Nicely done Frank.

    Pat

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