A Marytr’s Opportunity: a #TankaProse

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“It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far, far better rest that I go to than I have ever known.”

A Tale of Two Cities, Charles Dickens

https://www.stylist.co.uk/books/the-best-100-closing-lines-from-books/123681

A cobblestone square, bordered by the weather-worn granite walls of buildings with peeling facades. A scaffold made of splintering, weather-worn timber. A noose swinging back and forth like the pendulum of a grandfather clock.

Is there a crowd? Of course there is! The lure of righteous violence always draws the bloodthirsty. Perhaps they make raucous noise. Perhaps they stand in subdued silence. Either way, anticipation for an execution fills them.

It’s never as tidy as the climatic finale of “A Tale of Two Cities.” There isn’t an apathetic cynic, exhausted from pleasure and meaninglessness, standing in the place of his innocent doppelganger. There is an actual prisoner facing the hangman.

The end will come. With the snap of heavy rope suddenly grown taunt, a neck breaking, a corpse swinging back and forth. The roar or silence from a sated crowd will follow.

Who would take this prisoner’s place?

waning moonlight

in a serenity few

experience

I wait here listening

for a small, still voice

for Colleen’s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 160 #SynonymsOnly

and dVerse Poets’ Tuesday Poetics: Last lines (pubtended by Mish)

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24 responses to “A Marytr’s Opportunity: a #TankaProse”

  1. gillena cox Avatar
    gillena cox

    A very haunting tanka, Frank

    Much✏love

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Gillena! 😀

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  2. msjadeli Avatar

    Powerful writing, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jade! 😀

      This is one of those poems in which I crafted a totally new one during revision! 😆

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome. Hey, it happens! 🙂

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  3. -Eugenia Avatar

    Very compelling and intriguing, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Eugenia! 😀

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      1. -Eugenia Avatar

        You’re welcome! 😉

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  4. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Good old Sydney. One of my favourite (if a bit implausible) heroes. I like your allusion to the good old King James too 🙂

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jane! 😀

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  5. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like the thought of waiting for that voice in serenity.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Frank! 😀

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  6. lillian Avatar

    Haunting and powerful! Whew!

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    The thought of public execution makes me shudder… Reminds me of a line from Bob Dylan’s Desolation Row which is about a lynching.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      And lynching was far more torturous than hanging!

      Thanks, Bjorn!

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  8. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar

    What a setup to your Tanka, Frank. Amazing work! ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! 😀

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  9. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    I fear the snap of the rope will drown out the small, still voice. Sigh.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Beverly! 🙂

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  10. Mish Avatar

    “The roar or silence from a sated crowd will follow.” It’s hard to accept the barbaric nature of watching this and applauding it. A riveting piece, Frank.

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  11. jazzytower Avatar

    Wow, Frank!! Compelling stuff! Nicely done.

    Pat

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