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13 responses to “Meditation in Blue: a #Quadrille #Gembun #sequence”

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   Glenn A. Buttkus

   July 13, 2020

   Love it, Frank. You worked “blue” over and under, and per usual, your form is unique. Got me thinking of the “BlueTsunami” coming in November.

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   rothpoetry

   July 13, 2020

   Very nice set Frank! I can’t wait for the political smog to clear. Seem like Beijing with no Blue sky in sight!

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   sanaarizvi

   July 13, 2020

   This is excellent, Frank! I love; “The talk of a coming “Blue Tsunami…” As if. all the calm of the ocean
   politics,” .. succinct, clever and crisp 😀

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   Victoria Stuart

   July 13, 2020

   Wow, Frank, this is a new form to me and I love what you have done here.

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   Suzanne

   July 13, 2020

   This is lovely. I like the way you hae extended haiku in a new way.

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   peterfrankiswrites

   July 13, 2020

   concise and powerful (re)working of the theme – thanks also for the ‘blue Tsunami’ – (new to me) the world will be watching with breath bated.

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   msjadeli

   July 13, 2020

   I like how you went small to large with the blue. Lots said here.

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   Beverly Crawford

   July 13, 2020

   I love the trip from nature and summer winds to blue tsunami and politics….but then again, that just more summer wind, now isn’t it?

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   Arcadia Maria

   July 13, 2020

   I like your take on the prompt and the poetry form used. Well done.

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    Grace

    July 13, 2020

    I love the photos and the words sequence in meditation. I hope that blue tsunami is coming, to wash away the ocean of dirt.

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    gillena cox

    July 14, 2020

    Bravo! you blue weaved everday happenings in nature and politics so expertly

    Much💙love

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    kim881

    July 14, 2020

    I love the image, so many shades of blue, the shape and form of your quadrille, and the word play and imagery in:
    ‘Blues riff
    on a cocktail napkin
    a single tear’.
    I also share Grace’s hope that the blue tsunami washes away the ocean of dirt. Let’s see what mayhem Mary Trump’s book releases.

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    Jane Dougherty

    July 14, 2020

    Interesting form, Frank. I like the first stanza, makes me think of old Hollywood films, then old blue eyes…

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