#Haibun-block

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The drought continues. What roared through verdant channels now trickles. The lion’s roar is a kitten’s purr. Empty space calls forth a steady blankness.

Haiku flow easily enough. Tanka pour out with little difficulty.

But haibun?

I am William Shakespeare from “Shakespeare in Love,” lying on his apothecary’s couch, saying, “I’ve lost my gift.” The muse hisses at my pleas, muttering about what happened to my belief in practice. She’s right. I’ve scarecly lifted the gel-ink, push-button writer’s pen I bought at stables to write haibun in my refillable journals. The promises of “haibun hour” I’ve made, I break.

Thus, now that I go to the well, I find only dust emerging from a rickety bucket.

twilight

even in the cold

cricket songs

UPDATE: I’m hosting Haibun Monday (9/27/21) today over at dVerse, where we write about writer’s block!

The Pub is open! Come join us!

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29 responses to “#Haibun-block”

  1. Mark S Avatar

    Hi Frank, this is great! I really like the Shakespeare reference.

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  2. Ron. Avatar

    au contraire, mon ami. Sensationale!

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    1. ben Alexander Avatar

      I’m with Ron on this one!

      BTW – what’s “haibun hour”?


      David

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  3. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    You speak with eloquence of “losing your gift”. The old bard left us with no many great words and phrases. What a gift he had! No doubt your muse will arise once again, filled with wit and wisdom!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Beverly!

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  4. rothpoetry Avatar

    I love your post Frank. Words coming from the dry well in a bucket of rust! I think you do very well with Haibun!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Dwight! I definitely need to dredge the well! 🤣

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  5. Glenn A. Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn A. Buttkus

    Love the Shakespeare reference. You don’t seem to be not kidding about the WB. But “this too shall pass”, right?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      That’s the hope! Thanks, Glenn! 😀

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  6. Glenn A. Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn A. Buttkus

    “You don’t seem to be not”…I used to could write better than that.

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  7. msjadeli Avatar

    This grabs me:
    “I go to the well, I find only dust”
    What a great line, Frank.

    September rain falls
    cleaning all of the dust away
    bucket bobs in well

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Lisa!

      Sweet haiku! 😀

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome and glad you like the haiku your words inspired.

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  8. lynn__ Avatar

    Hope the rains come and the groundwater rises in your well, Frank! Thanks for the all-too-real prompt 🙂

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  9. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    Nice one Frank. Actually luv the shift from tect to haiku. Nice surprise there.

    Happy you dropped by my blog

    Much💖love

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  10. Ingrid Avatar

    This is beautifully written with marvellous imagery, Frank. Perhaps the cricket song has awakened your muse!

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  11. writingwhatnots Avatar
    writingwhatnots

    Great post, I love your images – perhaps the drought is beginning to clear.

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  12. Misky Avatar

    Excellent haibun, and fine writing.

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  13. Ken / rivrvlogr Avatar

    “I find only dust emerging from a rickety bucket” — Perfect!

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  14. Dora Avatar

    Frank,
    The emptiness of blank page, the drought of inspiration: your haibun says it all. You’ve definitely tapped into the imagery of writer’s block frustration.
    pax,
    dora

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  15. Suzanne Avatar

    Such a wonderfully poetic lament. Even though you feel you are blocked you write eloquently of the experience.

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  16. paeansunplugged Avatar

    If this is how one writes with a writer’s block, I would any day welcome one, Frank. You are truly inspiring.

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  17. petrujviljoen Avatar

    Lamenting one’s inadequacies out loud.

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  18. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love this… and I do remember the challenge to write anything too long when I tried to write short stories at around 5000 words when coming from flash fiction…

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  19. Ain Starlingsson Avatar
    Ain Starlingsson

    That is the great fear…have I lost the ability……great writing…thanks..

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