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color gone ~ gogyohka

#Haiku Happenings #2: Ken Gierke’s latest #gogyohka for Colleen’s #TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 247 #SynonymsOnly!

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color gone
as night awakens
dim dusk light
crescent moon rises
pale color returns

This gogyohka is my response to Colleen’s #TankaTuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge No. 247, #SynonymsOnly at Word Craft: Prose and Poetry,
using dusk and color for the offered words, twilight and hue.
I suppose you could say it’s a “short-line”tanka, as the syllables are consistent.

Photo: 27 April 2020 (click for larger view in new tab)

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