#Haiku Happenings #2: Nicholas Klacsanzky presents haiku by William J. Higginson along with commentaries!
the tick, tick
of snow on the reeds . . .
sparrow tracks
© William J. Higginson (USA)
As I see it, the scene conjures a time of early winter, when the snow falls, yet perhaps lightly. And adding to the scene, sparrow tracks (line three) which construes that once, a sparrow was exploring the marshy portion of this location. I take the whole image as another manifestation or celebration of the transitoriness of things and events in our lives.
The persona here could be a tracker or a hunter out to satiate his or her eagerness to score a game. And, finding the place devoid of life, contemplates what to do next… or retreated in the appreciation of the quietness of his or her surrounding.
– Willie Bongcaron (Philippines)
Here a sparrow has left its tracks in snow. Perhaps the sun has risen and the snow on the reeds…
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