Frank J. Tassone

Revise that Haiku – Mountain Peak

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Carpe Diem Weekend-Meditation #30 Revise That Haiku … Soen Nakagawa’s “mountain peak”

one note of the shakuhachi
resounds endlessly
piercing the winter clouds

disappearing
snow on mountain peak
unfurls a Rainbow

© Soen Nakagawa (1907-1984)

trill of the flute
winter clouds rent
one not resounds

~~~

rainbow unveiled
snow-covered peaks
melt

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