Today’s Haiku (June 18, 2018)

#Haiku Happenings #9: Fay Aoyagi’s Today’s Haiku features Akira Hatooka!

Fay's avatarBlue Willow Haiku World (by Fay Aoyagi)

あぢさゐのかくも疲れし前頭葉  波戸岡 旭

ajisai no kakumo tsukareshi zentoyô

            hydrangea…

            its frontal lobe

            so tired

                                                Akira Hatooka

from “Haiku-kai” (“Haiku World,” a monthly haiku magazine ,  December 2016 Issue,  Bungaku No Mori, Tokyo

Fay’s Note:   This one is tough to translate.   Japanese word after a hydrangea is ‘no’  (of).    But a flower doesn’t have a frontal lobe and this ‘no’ may be a soft cut…   Translation could (should?) be:

            hydrangea…

            my frontal lobe

            so tired

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