#Haiku Happenings #5: Fay Aoyagi’s Today’s Haiku features Mutsuo Takano!
Blue Willow Haiku World (by Fay Aoyagi)
裸木となる太陽と話すため 高野ムツオ
hadakagi to naru taiyô to hanasu tame
I become a bare tree
to talk
to the sun
Mutsuo Takano
from “Haiku Shiki” (“Haiku Four Seasons,” a monthly haiku magazine), December 2017 Issue, Tokyo Shiki Shuppan, Tokyo
Fay’s Note: Since the Japanese original does not have a subject, the poet might have meant ‘a tree becomes a tree.’ Then, the first line should be ‘it becomes a bare tree.’

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