#Haiku Happenings #2: Janice’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
A few takes on ‘thin ice’ for Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge:
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detecting thin ice
I hold
my response
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thin ice ahead
the strain
in her smile
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morning frost
in his voice
thin ice
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thin ice
a satisfying crackle
under my boots
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