“Call and Answer to Ono no Komachi”

#Haiku Happenings #7: Lady Nyo’s “Call and Answer!”

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Japanese Lovers II“Call and Answer” is one of the earliest in Japanese poetry.  Continuing the theme, a conversation, a communication with different inferences.  I decided to try my hand at this, and it was instructive and mostly….fun.

Hers appear first, mine (as answering) appear in italics.

 Lady Nyo

–

Did he appear

Because I fell asleep

Thinking of him?

If only I’d known I was dreaming

I’d never have awakened.

 

“How long will it last?

I know not his hidden heart.

This morning my thoughts

Are as tangled as my hair.

My blushes turn my face dark.”

—

When my desire

Grows too fierce

I wear my bed clothes

Inside out,

Dark as the night’s rough husk.

–

No moon tonight

Only a cold wind visits

Murasaki robe

Stained the color of grass

Invisible on this earth.

(Murasaki is a grass, lavender/purple, and also a name, etc.)

–

At least…

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2 responses to ““Call and Answer to Ono no Komachi””

  1. ladynyo Avatar

    Thank you, Frank…..Lady Nyo

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      My pleasure, Lady Nyo!

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