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21 responses to “#nahaiwrimo #2 (2/15/18) #haiku”

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   Frank Hubeny

   February 15, 2018

   I like how you started this with “birdflight”.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      February 16, 2018

      Thanks, Frank!

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   BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com

   February 15, 2018

   Tragic. 😦

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      Frank J. Tassone

      February 16, 2018

      Indeed.

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   Gospel Isosceles

   February 16, 2018

   I agree with Frank. Gave me the chills.

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   petrujviljoen

   February 16, 2018

   It’s a near epidemic!

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   whippetwisdom

   February 16, 2018

   So very sad, my heart goes out to the children and their families 💞

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   georgeplace2013

   February 16, 2018

   “birdflight” Feels like there is no end to this pain

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   Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

   February 16, 2018

   This is alas too true… afterwards it’s never safe

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      Frank J. Tassone

      February 16, 2018

      Indeed. 😔

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   Waltermarks

   February 16, 2018

   They were like robins in flight, some with red breasts. Very good haiku Frank

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   rothpoetry

   February 16, 2018

   So sad… Loved the sudden bird flight in your poem. So descriptive of what took place!
   Dwight

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      Frank J. Tassone

      February 17, 2018

      Thanks, Dwight.

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    Singledust

    February 17, 2018

    well chosen words

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       Frank J. Tassone

       February 17, 2018

       Thanks, Gina.

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    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    February 17, 2018

    Depp sigh.

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    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    February 17, 2018

    Oh sorry, I meant “deep”.

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    Mish

    February 17, 2018

    The image of the birds fleeing is powerful. …and so sad.

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    Sarah Russell

    February 18, 2018

    Do you think we’ve finally had enough? The bird flight was a wonderful image in this.

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    Gretchen Leary

    February 18, 2018

    Such a sad tragedy. The bird flight really created the perfect imagery for such a sad story.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       February 18, 2018

       Thanks.

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