#Haiku Happenings #1 (2/18/18): Merril’s latest #haibun for my current #haikai challenge!
A memory. His birthday falls over the long Presidents Day weekend. We wander through greenhouses where orchids and roses bloom, scenting the air with summer perfume. We stroll about the gardens without jackets, enjoying the taste of spring. The next day it snows.
February moon
hovers with uncertainty–
mist turns to snowflakes
This year, the morning sun gleams on the bare and budding branches. Birds flock, seeking sustenance, as the skies grow cloudy, and in the evening white flakes drift down to cover the emerging green sprouts. We wrap ourselves in blankets, eat birthday cake, and laugh.
Hands together grasp
wine and roses, youth and age
following the heart
A memory. His birthday falls over the long Presidents Day weekend. We wander through greenhouses where orchids and roses bloom, scenting the air with summer perfume. We stroll about the gardens without jackets, enjoying the taste of spring. The next day it snows.
February moon
hovers with uncertainty–
mist turns to snowflakes
This year, the morning sun gleams on the bare and budding branches. Birds flock, seeking sustenance, as the skies grow cloudy, and in the evening white flakes drift down to cover the emerging green sprouts. We wrap ourselves in blankets, eat birthday cake, and laugh.
Hands together grasp
wine and roses, youth and age
following the heart
At Longwood Gardens, February 2011.
At Longwood Gardens, February 2011.
Sunny Day; snow at night. February 17-18, 2018.
Sunny Day; snow at night. February 17-18, 2018.
I’ve combined challenges for this Haibun: Frank’s hazy moon challenge from last week, his current rose/Presidents’ Day challenge, and Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday challenge. The words we’re supposed to use synonyms for are character and affection. I don’t know if it’s correct to use both a haiku and senryu in one piece, but I did.
I’ve combined challenges for this Haibun: Frank’s hazy moon challenge from last week, his current rose/Presidents’ Day challenge, and Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday challenge. The words we’re supposed to use synonyms for are character and affection. I don’t know if it’s correct to use both a haiku and senryu in one piece, but I did.
February Birthday Roses: Haibun
https://merrildsmith.wordpress.com/2018/02/18/february-birthday-roses-haibun/
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Thank you, Frank!
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I’m so happy you shared Merril’s lovely spring Haibun. ❤
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Of course! She linked to my challenge as well as your own. And she wrote a beautiful haibun. That’s haikai. And Haikai matters! 😉
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I had to look it up. See, you guys teach me such cool things. LOVE it! 😀
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