2/26/18: beach
changing tide …
only the cry of sea gulls
in a shore breeze
revision 1:
changing tides …
sea gulls cry
in the wind
revision 2:
changing tides …
cries of sea gulls
in the wind
(hat tip James W. McRight Jr. for the suggested edits)
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