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#Haiku Happenings #6: Janice’s latest haiku for Carpe Diem!

Ontheland

Snow covered treetops

a cherry blossom dreamland

until the branch falls

©️2018 Ontheland

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My haiku is a ‘revision’ of this haiku written by 18th century Japanese poet, Yosa Buson:

a branch snaps under snow

waking me from a dream of the cherries

flowering on Yoshino

© Yosa Buson 1716-1784

Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #28 Revise that Haiku

Photo of snow trees is from Pixabay.com

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