#Haiku Happenings #1 (8/18/18): Janice’s latest tan #renga, with haiku from Basho, for Carpe Diem!
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The Basho haiku for this Carpe Diem Renga challenge are translated by Robert Hass. The two-line responses in italics are mine. A true exchange of stanzas would be done in real time. This challenge is an opportunity to appreciate the haiku of a master and to practice writing two-line 7 syllable responses (I use the syllable count as a guide but don’t force my responses to comply).
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cedar umbrellas, off
to Mount Yoshimo for
the cherry blossoms
©️Basho
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our favourite rite of spring
don’t forget the wine glasses
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midfield,
attached to nothing,
the skylark singing
©️Basho
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crescent moon lingering to
enjoy a dawn serenade
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with every gust of wind,
the butterfly changes its place
on the willow
©️Basho
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bamboo chimes clack and sway
a lullaby in rustling leaves
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the dragonfly
can’t quite land
on that blade of grass
©️Basho
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dewdrops…
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