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A Sense of Place: MOUNTAIN – smell

#Haiku Happenings #8: THF’s A Sense of Place: MOUNTAIN — smell!

 

A Sense of Place:  MOUNTAIN – smell

inhaling all that blue
washing over me
Altai mountains

Celestine Nudanu

The reader of this poem may sense the feeling of being overwhelmed by the immensity of nature – of being overcome by it, at least temporarily… a feeling commonly felt by those who have adventures in places like the Yukon…

mountain rivulets
flanked by ferns
– a whiff of wellness

Corine Timmer

Here the poet expresses an idea shared by several others this week, the idea that the air in the mountains is better for health, or that being out in nature can be restorative…

halfway down the mountain
the smell
of brakes

Randy Brooks

Such a frightening thought, and presented in such a way that the reader can compose many plausible endings to this story…

 

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