#Haiku Happenings #5: Janice’s latest #shardorma #haibun!
Yesterday morning I was in the kitchen moving plates, running water for tea, waking up, when I heard a radio voice announcing the temperature outside as “negative two”. I already knew it was a below-zero morning, the first this fall. What startled me was the language she used: “negative two”.
“negative”
the word slays my mood
try “minus”
to measure
those degrees below zero
they’ll rise to “plus”
~
©2018 Ontheland

Leave a Reply