#Haiku Happenings #6: Janice’s latest #haikai for Carpe Diem!
retro radio
I catch up
with my teen era
:
autumn slush rain
fresh colour on the road
lemon puddles
:
defog on high
no heat on the floor
the wipers squeak
a doleful autumn preview
of winter driving
:
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I wrote the closing tanka in response to Carpe Diem #1543 Rainstorm which challenges us to write haiku or tanka about a rainstorm without referring to it directly.

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