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s 3.3 defined precipitation / haikai 75 | Jules Longer Strands of Gems

#Haiku Happenings #6: Jules’ latest solo #renga for my current #haikai challenge!

defined precipitation

even in the dark

the snow is light, crystals gleam

by the sun or moon

the weight may change, hang heavy

when a shovel is needed

all muffled; ready

with a broom, if light enough

sweep awayuki

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Frank’s haikai 75 awayuki–light snow. Please remember that if you visit through the…
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