Haibun: The Balloon

#Haiku Happenings #8: Toni Spencer’s latest #quadrille #haibun for #dVersepoets!

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For Merrill’s prompt at dVerse – a quadrille.  A quadrille is a poem in any form with exactly 44 words using the prompted word, sans title.  The word today is “rise”.  A haibun in the manner of Basho.

Haibun: The Balloon
“Perhaps wisdom… is realizing how small I am, and unwise, and how far I have yet to go.” Anthony Bourdain

The day I buried my mother’s ashes was a hot summer day. I untied the balloon from my wrist and let it go. I watched it rise quickly to the sky.
balloon rises to heaven
and clears the trees –
my heart goes with it

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2 responses to “Haibun: The Balloon”

  1. larry trasciatti Avatar

    really good metaphor, though such a sad occasion

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Toni Spencer is the real deal!

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