#Haiku Happenings #7: Dave Madden’s latest #senryu for my current #Haikai Challenge!
His forehead’s cut gushed,
Like a bloody waterfall,
From an elbow’s slice.
Prompted from Frank J. Tassone’s Haikai Challenge at: https://frankjtassone.com/2020/07/25/haikai-challenge-149-7-25-20-waterfall-taki-haiku-senryu-haibun-tanka-haiga-renga/.
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Excellent. Love the last line being so stripped down and simple and as sharp as a full tang tempered steel knife that has just painted the fluid landscape of the 1st 2 lines.
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Dave Madden is the real deal! 😉
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Yup! 🙂
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I’ve been in that spot, been in that spot on both sides of the elbow. Your haiku embraces that place, from both sides.
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Thank you for the feedback, but I reblogged Dave Madden’s senryu for my challenge. 😉
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Oh, 🙂 I meant the elbow. So, Dave Madden’s Senryu embraces that place, from both sides. Still excellent. Thanks for clarifying.
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