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Matúš Nižňanský’s snowflakes

#Haiku Happenings #6: Nicholas Klacsanzky presents (and features commentary on) a haiku by Matúš Nižňanský!

Haiku Commentary

monastery garden —
the sound of
snowflakes

Matúš Nižňanský(Slovakia)

The deep silence in this haiku is palpable. This is an exceptional example of the power of “show not tell” in haiku. In this moment, we can hear the snowflakes falling onto the plants in the garden. There are no other sounds. Because of the delicate nature of snowflakes and plants, they further amplify the silence and deepen it.

The ancient beauty of a monastery is juxtaposed with the fresh beauty of new snowflakes. While some predict the first snow on this Earth happened 2.4 billion years ago, it is astounding to note that each and every snowflake is different and unique. Along these lines, the image of a monastery conjures up memories of many monks or nuns who lived here over many years since its construction. While this poem is clearly a haiku moment, there is also an…

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