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Evocations

#Haiku Happenings #2: Jane Dougherty’s syzygy-triptych of #gogyohka for #dVersePoetsPub’s #MTB Three Way Split!

Jane Dougherty Writes

For the dverse prompt.

Evocations

1.
High, beyond tree branches,
blue-bedded, cloud-cradled,
the day-star rocks the world
from side to side,
chariot of fire.

2.
Light swarming in silver streams
from moon-fullness,
I stand in the ebbing tide,
foam lapping bare ankles,
phosphor-flamed, dreaming.

3.
Sunken sun highlighted
with fire silhouette, crowns this hill
of the omphalos. Listen to the earth voice
in the crackling flames. Dance until
moonrise.

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  1. Here are the top 3 key points from Jane Dougherty’s “syzygy-triptych” gogyohka for dVersePoetsPub’s MTB Three Way Split:

    1. The day-star rocks the world from side to side, chariot of fire.
    2. Light swarming in silver streams from moon-fullness, standing in the ebbing tide, dreaming.
    3. Sunken sun highlighted with fire silhouette, crowns this hill of the omphalos.

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