A #RhymeRoyal poetic #haibun

Moon

Frank Hubeny at dVerse challenges us to write a Chaucerian stanza or Rhyme Royal. This form employs a rhyme scheme of ababbcc, written in (usually) iambic pentameter metric lines (seven) in up to three stanzas. But I write haikai. What to do? Go poetic in the prose-poem, and break haiku rules and rhyme, that’s what!

 

Moon Madness

 

a single night under Diana’s light

and foaming at the mouth for something new

I wrestle with desires far from right

 

Save me from a simple point of view

longing as I am for something true

 

silhouetted ruins

windswept footprints in the dunes

lost to this high tide

 

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10 responses to “A #RhymeRoyal poetic #haibun”

  1. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice modification of Chaucerian stanza and creative use of haiku as well.

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  2. Glenn Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn Buttkus

    Creative changes in the form work well for you; thinking outside the box; nice closing haiku as well..

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  3. rosross Avatar

    An innovative approach. Well done.

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  4. kim881 Avatar

    I love the originality and creativity of your Chaucerian Haibun, Frank! I especially like the haiku, with its footprints in the dunes, leading you to something that wasn’t totally lost in the tide.

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  5. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Bravo! Haiku itches to rhyme sometimes and you did it beautifully.

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  6. nosaintaugustine Avatar
    nosaintaugustine

    Successful blending of the forms! Love the image of ruins/dunes in your haiku.

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  7. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    A wonderful modification- the footprints in the dunes work so well

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  8. lillian Avatar

    A stunning modification of the form!

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