Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge calls for inclusion of the words quiet and space, or their synonyms. Here is my Tanka:
shattered silence
Dave Matthews singing
“the space between…”
too early, this velvet sky
too early, this break of dawn
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Oh, that’s an excellent Tanka, Frank. I like it. Well done! ❤
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Thanks, Colleen!
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