A #Tanka for A Month with Yeats: Day Twenty-Two

‘I wander by the edge
Of this desolate lake
Where wind cries in the sedge:’ —W.B. Yeats

A windswept Llyn Pen Moelyn - geograph.org.uk - 1312308Peter Smyly [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0)], via Wikimedia Commons

 

windswept lake

daylight the only witness

to our moans and sighs

her passion-spent hand caresses

my battle-scarred, tear-stained cheek

 

for Jane Dougherty’s A Month with Yeats: Day Twenty-two

Advertisements

Posted

in

,

by

Comments

4 responses to “A #Tanka for A Month with Yeats: Day Twenty-Two”

  1. sarahsouthwest Avatar

    I feel like I’ve seen the very tip of something much bigger. So much in so few words.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Very cinematographic (if that’s how you spell it) !

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a comment

Blogroll


The Wombwell Rainbow
The Wombwell Rainbow
Inspiration, History, Imagination

The Elephant's Trunk
The Elephant's Trunk
🐘 Nancy is a storyteller, music blogger, humorist, quasi poet, curveballer, dreamer 🐘

Gulf Coast Poet
Gulf Coast Poet
gulfcoastpoet.com

A Unique Title For Me
A Unique Title For Me
Hoping to make the world more beautiful

joyful2beeblogs
joyful2beeblogs
Stories about life; past, and present

Colleen Chesebro, Author & Poet
Colleen Chesebro, Author & Poet
Crafting Magic through Prose & Poetry

Mom With a Blog
Mom With a Blog
✝️🙏🏼✨🌸

Annette Rochelle Aben
~ Communicator, WordSmith, Artist, Guide, Mentor, Muse ~

Tanka Tuesday
Tanka Tuesday
Join Us: #TankaTuesday 短歌 火曜日

The Bag Lady
The Secret of Change Is to Focus All of Your Energy, Not on Fighting the Old, But on Building the New – Socrates

Frank J. Tassone-American Haijin by Frank J. Tassone is licensed under CC BY-NC-ND 4.0