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25 responses to “My Daily #Haiku #3”

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   jillys2016

   April 17, 2018

   Those crows – they kill me! lol! Nice bit of imagery here.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 17, 2018

      Thanks, Jilly! 😀

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   Grace

   April 17, 2018

   Love the creative spin ~

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 17, 2018

      Thanks, Grace! 😀

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   Frank Hubeny

   April 18, 2018

   “Thanksgiving” and “Takes” seem to tie this together.

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   Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

   April 18, 2018

   I really love the way you capture the story outside the frame of the picture

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 18, 2018

      Thanks, Bjorn! 😀

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   sarahsouthwest

   April 18, 2018

   This haiku is like a tiny bomb – maybe not a bomb, actually, something more life-affirming – it just explodes an image for me, with sound and weather, and everything. Looking back at the picture, your haiku made that single autumn leaf glow.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 18, 2018

      Thanks, Sarah! 😀

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   thotpurge

   April 18, 2018

   Gives me the image of the sky darkening.. like an omen!

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 18, 2018

      Thanks!

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   hypercryptical

   April 18, 2018

   So well done. An image of what happened before.
   Anna :o]

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 18, 2018

      Thanks, Anna!

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   Kerry

   April 18, 2018

   Oh dear, that sounds inauspicious.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 18, 2018

      Indeed, Kerry! Thanks!

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   Vivian Zems

   April 18, 2018

   I like!

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      Frank J. Tassone

      April 18, 2018

      😀

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    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    April 18, 2018

    Excellent.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       April 18, 2018

       Thanks! 😀

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    Margaret Elizabeth Bednar

    April 19, 2018

    I’ve used “murder of crows” a few times – love the words as they don’t mean what we might think.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       April 19, 2018

       😀

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       Frank J. Tassone

       April 21, 2018

       Thanks for the link! 🙂

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    Sarah Russell

    April 23, 2018

    Cool take on this one, Frank.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       April 23, 2018

       Thanks, Sarah! 😀

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