Sentinel Dome Ascent: an #AmericanSentence #haibun

Half Dome, Yosemite National Park

I pause to catch my breath. Panting follow panting, as my hands clench my knees, but I can’t get enough. Mira looks on in concern. The ascent above glacial point taxed us both, while our Cross-Country-running trained son ascended with envious ease.

She prepares to speak when I stand up straight. I nod.

“Are you sure?” She asks, incredulous.

“Let’s go,” I answer.

We follow the rest of the trail, past the last pine trees, to the base of Sentinel Dome. Pure granite awaits. Others rise along its face.; the Rock could care less.

With the last of my strength, I step out onto granite and climb to the apex. Where the ceaseless wind and vast vistas of Yosemite greet me in equal measure.

I embrace them both.

The Rock cries out to us today,ย You may stand upon me,ย But do not hide your face.

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19 responses to “Sentinel Dome Ascent: an #AmericanSentence #haibun”

  1. msjadeli Avatar

    Oh my goodness, what a shot! I like the story as well.

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  2. rothpoetry Avatar

    Great story Frank. We are not eighteen any longer!! Yosemite is so beautiful!

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  3. gillena cox Avatar
    gillena cox

    Two generations will pace the run differently. Both will enjoy the view of their timing.
    Lovely taking along the reader with you Frank. Happy you dropped by to read mine

    Much ๐Ÿ˜Šlove

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  4. kim881 Avatar

    Reading about these mountain climbs makes me wish I was younger and fitter, Frank. I would have loved to climb a mountain, but the landscape around here is flat and Iโ€™d have to travel to Wales or Scotland to find mountains. I am full of admiration for anyone who can hug a summit and touch the sky.

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  5. pvcann Avatar

    A story I can live into and appreciate, I love how the rock is both challenge, rest and shelter and also foundation.

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      1. pvcann Avatar

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  6. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    A well written story of the victory of the climb. Thanks for taking us along, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Beverly! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  7. Linda Lee Lyberg Avatar

    Beautiful shot with an endearing story!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Linda! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  8. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I do remember climbing when I was younger, these days I prefer a slower ascent. I hope to get into the mountain as soon as we get a little bit more daylight.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Bjรถrn! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. hank77 Avatar

    kaykuala

    Beautifully done Frank. It’s as though we are there with you. Very realistically real!

    Hank

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  10. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Taking on the rock. A story of perseverance.

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  11. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Perfect use of this prompt. I have wonderful memories of being there, though not in a hiking capacity. Gorgeous photo!

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