Death Defying: a Day 8 #NapoWriMo2020 / #GloPoWriMo2020 #gogyohka – #haiku #L’Arora

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The moon has set

as though only that ever

needed to be said

Even before first light

deer graze in the yard

scampering fawn

follows its mother

after dawn

All that remains is

the ruins of paradise from

a denied future

unwilling to be perfect

in our imperfection

blood moon

this endless denial of

the Triune

How will you grasp

the four corners of his desk

like a god unchained

severed fingers that once held

the master carpenter’s tools

potter’s field

the fresh-turned earth for

the one that won’t yield

amid the stones

Chrysanthemums blooming

another chance

to unclench the iron grip

upon the wheel

sunrise

the realization

that all die

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15 responses to “Death Defying: a Day 8 #NapoWriMo2020 / #GloPoWriMo2020 #gogyohka – #haiku #L’Arora”

  1. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    These are wonderfully rendered, Frank! ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I enjoyed the Haikai twist to the form ๐Ÿ™‚ especially like; “another chance to unclench the iron grip upon the wheel.” Thank you so much for writing to the challenge ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sanaa! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. kim881 Avatar

    Kudos, Frank, I only managed two stanzas! I particularly love the early morning image of the deer and her fawn, one that is familiar to me as deer think our garden is their home.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Kim! ๐Ÿ™‚ Oh, I relate to that feeling, as our deer are regular squatters!

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  3. merrildsmith Avatar

    Well done wit these lines, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Merril! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Ellecee Avatar
    Ellecee

    I love this, especially the interweaving of the Haikai. The images are special๐Ÿ™

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Rosemary! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. -Eugenia Avatar

    Beautifully penned, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Eugenia! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. -Eugenia Avatar

        My pleasure!

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  6. Sherry Marr Avatar
    Sherry Marr

    Much to think about in this poem. I especially love the fawn scampering after its mother in the dawn. Beautiful.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sherry! ๐Ÿ™‚

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