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6 responses to “A Cascade of War Paint”

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   Jordan Hoggard

   July 29, 2020

   Excellent. Love the last line being so stripped down and simple and as sharp as a full tang tempered steel knife that has just painted the fluid landscape of the 1st 2 lines.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      July 29, 2020

      Dave Madden is the real deal! 😉

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         Jordan Hoggard

         July 29, 2020

         Yup! 🙂

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   Jordan Hoggard

   July 29, 2020

   I’ve been in that spot, been in that spot on both sides of the elbow. Your haiku embraces that place, from both sides.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      July 29, 2020

      Thank you for the feedback, but I reblogged Dave Madden’s senryu for my challenge. 😉

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         Jordan Hoggard

         July 29, 2020

         Oh, 🙂 I meant the elbow. So, Dave Madden’s Senryu embraces that place, from both sides. Still excellent. Thanks for clarifying.

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