Counting the Cost

Theirs was a marriage of convenience, no more. Yet somehow, Yasodharā and Siddharta discovered love. Walks in the palace gardens, songs and dances at feasts held in their honor, and quiet moments alone by the lotus pond nurtured their mutual desire.

Legends speak of one night of their love making. While in the thrall of their intimacy, both rolled off their balcony and fell to waiting blossoms that cushioned their fall.

Five years after their year-long honeymoon, Yasodhara gave birth to their first-born son. But Siddharta, strangely troubled, named him Rāhula—”fetter.”

How could she know that one night her beloved would gaze at her back, while she slept with their babe beside her, and leave them? She smiled with such delight then, lovingly gazing at sleeping Rāhula before falling so herself.

But that smile was the last smile
To come upon her face.

We write prosery tonight over at dVerse, where pubtender Lisa prompts us with the sentence:

But that smile was the last smile
To come upon her face.

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9 responses to “Counting the Cost”

  1. merrildsmith Avatar

    You worked the line in so well, Frank!

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  2. rothpoetry Avatar

    Well done, Frank. Great use of the prompt.

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  3. dorahak Avatar

    Such a clever use of the line! Hardly to be applauded, given his responsibility as a father, but I wonder if his first-born became a fetter to his desire for his wife and then eventually translated to all earthly desire.

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    Frank, what a beautiful story about the (mythical) Buddha and his path to enlightenment. You bring it down from the clouds and up close and personal. Love the image you used also.

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  5. ben Alexander Avatar

    Frank, you adeptly explore Yasodharā and Siddharta’s complex relationship with powerful storytelling. The evolution of their connection, the poignant twist in naming their son, and the tragic end with the quoted line create a haunting narrative. Well done in crafting a succinct and impactful story!

    ~David

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    The line works so well as a standalone poem of a haibun.. the lover having fulfilled his purpose of fathering a child didn’t stand up being the father and lover.

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  7. poetisatinta Avatar

    You certainly brought the story to earth and great use of the line 🙌

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  8. Carol C Avatar
    Carol C

    So much within your story! It flows well.

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  9. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Plus ça change….

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