#Way-back Wednesday 10/11/17…when talking…#haiku #haibun #poetry

About that Night

 

What was it about you? Was it the look in your eyes? The way you kept

your curly hair like you just rolled out of bed?

 

Or was it simply circumstances? Me, with a girlfriend living outside

Philadelphia whom I hadn’t seen since July. You, unattached, sitting on

the barstool next to me at the Road House in Binghamton. Both of us

sipping a mediocre beer, lost in what we weren’t saying.

 

An awkward goodnight becomes passionate kissing, embracing,

groping. Becomes me whispering, “Do you have any?”

 

twisted cotton sheets
wisps of cloud above
the garbage-strewn alley

 

 

first published in Contemporary Haibun Online, Vol. 10, no. 4, January 2015

 

UPDATE: for Real Toads–The Poem as a One-Sided Conversation

 

 

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19 responses to “#Way-back Wednesday 10/11/17…when talking…#haiku #haibun #poetry”

  1. coalblack Avatar

    “It seemed like the thing to do at the time.” I end up saying that a lot.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Don’t we all? LOL!

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  2. kim881 Avatar

    I love your autobiographical haibun,. Frank, and the haiku in this one bowled me over!

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        You’re more than welcome, Frank!

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  3. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    I loved the honesty in this! Yes we do that sometimes .. and why not?😊 Beautifully penned, Frank.💖

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa! It was a lifetime ago. 😉

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  4. kanzensakura Avatar

    It seemed like the thing to do at the time…oh my yes. I liked this sensual piece Frank. It was honest and reminded me of way back when. The haiku is exceptional.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Toni! 😀

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  5. Kerry Avatar
    Kerry

    You captured the moment so well; it reads like a scene from a movie.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Kerry! 🙂

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  6. Vivian Zems Avatar

    Lust is such a potent drug…who can resist it?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Certainly not a twenty-two-year-old college graduate! LOL!

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    This is a great haibun… the thought of mediocre beer and the garbage strewn alley… somehow it colors it with something like regret.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn! 🙂

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    I can see the whole scene as clearly as if on a screen.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sherry! I appreciate that!

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  9. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar Avatar

    Some things never leave our sub-consciousness… no matter how we try and explain it away.

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