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28 responses to “#Tanka Tuesday #2…the Wild Beauty of Street Art…#haiku #poetry”

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   Shawna

   November 14, 2017

   “lovers odor all over
   the comfy front seat”

   Nice. I love where you took this.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2017

      Thanks, Shawna!

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   lillian

   November 14, 2017

   Well that’s a love chariot for sure! 🙂

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2017

      🙂

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      lillian

      November 14, 2017

      PS: your son has good taste! I chose this one first also (I did two). I thought this one was really really fun to see 🙂

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         Frank J. Tassone

         November 14, 2017

         Exactly! 🙂

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   X

   November 14, 2017

   lovers odor all over the front seat.

   I think everyone is going to point out those lines. ha.

   though, I find the backseat a bit more spacious. and no arm rest to deal with. ha.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2017

      Armrest? In that jalopy? 😆 still, I get your point about the back seat, but these lovers just couldn’t make it! 😉

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   Grace

   November 14, 2017

   Love this part best:

   What wild flight of fancy

   do we overlook each day?

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   Truedessa

   November 14, 2017

   perhaps, we miss out on too many opportunities…

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   kiwinana

   November 14, 2017

   Beautiful outcome of such a simple prompt. Love it.Thanks.

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   whippetwisdom

   November 15, 2017

   Brilliant! I especially love ‘What wild flight of fancy do we overlook each day?’ 😉

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   kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)

   November 15, 2017

   lovers odor all over
   the comfy front seat

   It sure takes in a lot of punishment to rightly go on a flight of fancy!

   Hank

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   Sumana Roy

   November 15, 2017

   “lovers odor all over / the comfy front seat”…I’ll remember this when I get into one 🙂

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    Mary (tqhousecat)

    November 15, 2017

    Love the ending…it creates further musing.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       November 15, 2017

       Thanks!

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    Frank Hubeny

    November 15, 2017

    We probably overlook many flights of fancy. Good advice to pay attention to them.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       November 15, 2017

       😀

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    Colleen Chesebro

    November 15, 2017

    Nice Tanka, Frank. Your use of words is perfect. Aren’t the synonyms fun? ❤

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    Vivian Zems

    November 15, 2017

    Two in one…..and you did it well!

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    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    November 15, 2017

    I have to agree with X… the backseat would be even better for a tryst… but with balloons it would work anyway.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       November 15, 2017

       😆 indeed, Bjorn!

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    angieinspired

    November 15, 2017

    Winnebago’s always make me think of Granny and Gramps getting it on:) ha. Your front seat quip made me think of my own preconceived notions.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       November 15, 2017

       Then my work here is done. 😉 Thanks, Angie!

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          angieinspired

          November 15, 2017

          Another day, another daydream

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          Frank J. Tassone

          November 15, 2017

          😆

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