#Throwdown Thursday (1/18/18): Avian Antics–my latest #haibun is up on .@ImageCurve #haiku # poetry

Avian Antics

A red-breasted robin leaps onto a high, thin branch on the apple tree. Branch and bird swing up and down three times. Then it flies.

A nearby maple tree’s high branch swings up and down. The robin?

Nowhere in sight.

morning clouds
swaying in a passing breeze
a dogwood

 

first published in Image Curve, January 18, 2018

 

photo by Asdrubal luna

 

UPDATE: for Poets United–Poetry Pantry #387

 

 

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13 responses to “#Throwdown Thursday (1/18/18): Avian Antics–my latest #haibun is up on .@ImageCurve #haiku # poetry”

  1. jazzytower Avatar

    That 2nd bounce was a little too strong for it. Pick on something your own size then☺

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  2. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    Enjoyed this–a scene I see repeated at home so often. The robins brave the cold weather in Northern Nevada and it’s so easy to see them and all the other avian friends who enjoy our berries and suet.

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  3. magicofwordsblog Avatar
    magicofwordsblog

    Oh the birds flying from tree to tree are so lovely to watch! Enjoyed your haibun! 😊

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I really feel that sense of movement more than the bird itself.

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  5. Susan Avatar
    Susan

    The collage of picture, prose and poetry are lovely, evocative, spiritual.

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  6. Bekkie Sanchez Avatar

    Beautiful! The moment caught in movement! I wait to see a robin, it’s still winter.

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  7. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    Very visual, and you brought the movement alive too.

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  8. Sanaa Rizvi Avatar

    Gorgeous write!💞

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  9. Mary Avatar

    Agreeing with what others have said! Nice one.

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  10. Mary Avatar

    Ah, so much said with so few words! I enjoyed this.

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