A Katana’s Lament: a #Tankaprose…#tanka #haibun #poetry

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What? You expected gratitude?

That you forged me of steel in the hottest flames? More than two-hundred folds to ensure my density? Sharpened my edge so that, in a master’s hand, I could slice through bamboo in a single stroke?

Then you ignored the wisdom of the old master:

“Weapons are unhappy tools…”

 

barren fields

legends scripted in blood

on faded parchment

how many young men die

for old men’s dreams?

 

Why should I be grateful?

I am a tool whose intended use is slaughter. My sharp edge can as easily dismember a man from shoulder to hip as a bamboo trunk. And often did, in the hands of angry young men–privledged with rank and training–when mere peasants “dishonored” them. Such summary execution was a samurai’s right, after all.

And how many truly noble samurai did I cut down in duals among masters, or masters’ pupils? How many perished because of me in the civil wars following the Heian period?

Do you truly believe I will thank you?

 

crow caws

another transport departs

with wide-eyed young men

Is lasting peace an exercise

in futility?

 

for Poets United–Midweek Motif–weapon,

Colleen’s #Tanka Tuesday Weekly #Poetry Challenge no. 68, and

Kiwinana’s #Weekly Tanka Prompt #Poetry Challenge–week 81

 

 

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25 responses to “A Katana’s Lament: a #Tankaprose…#tanka #haibun #poetry”

  1. Janice Avatar

    Dramatic and powerful!

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  2. kiwinana Avatar

    That’s an interesting read. Thanks.
    Hope your week is peaceful.

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  3. hypercryptical Avatar
    hypercryptical

    Powerful write Frank – you gave the weapon a much needed voice.
    Anna :o]

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  4. kim881 Avatar

    I like the perspective of this piece, Frank, the direct address and the overall shape.I particularly like the lines:
    ‘Weapons are unhappy tools’
    and
    ‘how many young men die
    for old menโ€™s dreams?’

    Like

  5. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Haibun Tankas! WELL done, Frank. ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen! Iโ€™ve been fortunate to have had some Tanka-prose of mine published by Contemporary Haibun Online in the past. ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        What fun. Did you check out the challenge post suggestions?

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      2. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        Indeed. ๐Ÿ˜€

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      3. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        Thatโ€™s what I wanted to hear! โ˜บ๏ธ

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  6. oldegg Avatar

    It’s not the weapon but the hands that wield it. Why should war be shunned when it is so profitable? As the world is overpopulated what better job than to be in the service of the country as we can always find a reason to make war.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      O the irony, that were all tools only tools, we would all still wield the weapon of our will. And the rationalizations to use it any way we want!

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  7. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    “How many young men die for old men’s dreams?” What a perfect question. I say, let’s send the old warmongers to war, and leave all the young men at home.

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  8. Susan Avatar
    Susan

    “โ€œWeapons are unhappy toolsโ€ฆโ€

    “barren fields
    legends scripted in blood
    on faded parchment
    how many young men die
    for old menโ€™s dreams?”

    What a powerful voice you give this weapon that would rather be a tool. I applaud Awesome.

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  9. Sumana Roy Avatar

    Weapon production is a fine business so is this lasting terrorism. Peace has no place here. “Is lasting peace an exercise / in futility?” It is. I like the lay out of the poem, the weapon voice and the powerful Tanka. Nice.

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  10. jaerose37 Avatar

    A searing write – very powerful

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  11. Bekkie Sanchez Avatar

    Awesome write! I like the weapon you chose.

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  12. jazzytower Avatar

    Love the voice here Frank. Very nicely done.

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  13. Carrie Van Horn Avatar

    Love how you went with the perspective of the weapon Frank. A powerful and brilliant write!

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  16. Marje @ Kyrosmagica Avatar

    Powerful topic and poetic execution.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Marje! ๐Ÿ˜€

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