A Rain Meditation: an .@ImageCurve #haibun

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Steady rainfall. The Pastore’s new generator hums. Across the street Stacy and Laurie talk. A sparrow perches on a maple tree, taking shelter under its leaves.

Cool draft at my cheek. The power is out again. Rain picks up. A steady swoosh with a hint of rattle as it strikes the asphalt.

Waiting for Frankie and Mira. Modest gray light outside. The living room remains the brightest room in the house.

summer shower —
old oak sheltering
the maple

 

more by FRANK J. TASSONE

photograph by Alexandra Latypova

 

first published in Image Curve, May 7, 2015

 

 

UPDATE: for Real Toads’ Fifty Shades of Rain (imagined by Toni Spencer)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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12 responses to “A Rain Meditation: an .@ImageCurve #haibun”

  1. kanzensakura Avatar

    Excellent work Frank. The haiku is spectscular. I can smell the atmosphere in this wonderful hsibun.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Toni! 😀

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  2. MrsBednar Avatar
    MrsBednar

    Nice Haibun – felt I was standing out there with you and I ADORE the haiku!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! 😀

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  3. kim881 Avatar

    An atmospheric snapshot, Frank, which draws me in. I feel as if I know the people in it and love the sparrow in the maple tree! The haiku is sublime.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Kim! 😀

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  4. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    This is lovely, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sherry! 😀

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  5. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    The atmosphere is perfect… waiting in that brightest spot…. I feel like I’m put into a cocoon of being.

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  6. purplepeninportland Avatar

    A mesmerizing haiku. Love this, Frank!

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  7. Suzanne Avatar
    Suzanne

    A measured and refined piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it.

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