Little Things Noticed While Grieving

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You are so still. No rising and falling in your chest. You mouth lies wide open. Someone closed your eyes. The same tepid sunlight partially fills the room and casts shadows throughout. A glass of unfinished pepsi remains by your bedside.

You are so still. But morticians styled your hair and applied your makeup. You look well in the dress you picked out for yourself. You look comfortable on the cushioned back of the casket you pre-ordered. Mira slips a bottle of pepsi under your arm.

You are so still. Not that I can see you, for your coffin is sealed and left on your open grave. The wind rips through the pavillion where we sit facing you.

They soon carve your name next to Dad’s on the headstone.

sunset

a lone crow

takes flight

Imaginary Gardens with Real Toads’ Bits of Inspiration ~ Poems in April ~ Bell (imagined by Susie Cleavenger)


The temple bell stops but I still hear the sound coming out of the flowers.
–Matsuo Basho

#NaPoWriMo2019 / #GloPoWriMo2019 18/30

WD April PAD 2019 18/30

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19 responses to “Little Things Noticed While Grieving”

  1. Jim Avatar
    Jim

    Sort of reminds .e of when Dad died. Mom had died nine years earlier. Dad, Mrs. Jim, and I picked the double headstone and had Mom’s vitals etched. But Dad was ready for his at any time. But God wasn’t finished with him yet. That’s a long story.
    ..

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed. Thank you, Jim. Iโ€™m sorry for your loss.

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  2. Susie Clevenger Avatar
    Susie Clevenger

    This goes straight to my heart. It is beautifully written. Thank you for taking part in the prompt.

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  3. kanzensakura Avatar

    Lovely haibun that goes straight to my heart.

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  4. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar

    Yes. Perfect. Especially the haiku.

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  5. Ennle Madresan Avatar
    Ennle Madresan

    Incredibly beautiful, it leaves heart hushed.

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      1. Ennle Madresan Avatar
        Ennle Madresan

        Most welcome, Sir.

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  6. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Grief sees with the heart.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, it does, Sue. Thank you.

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  7. Vivian Zems Avatar

    Beautiful, Frank. I read it and just thought ..”wow’. For grief to even find words, is a miracle.

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  8. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love the fact that you have written this in second person…. to face the dead like that in words bring so much more than just describing it…

    love the crow in the haiku.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn. The NaPoWriMo.net prompt called for an elegy that focused on images to express emotions. It reminded me of William Carlos Williams’ “No ideas but in things.”

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  9. purplepeninportland Avatar

    I love the way you wrote this, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sara.

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