To Write a #Haibun / #TankaProse: an #Ekphrastic #MetaPoem


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See what you see: A river of starlight across the black, the sparkles of starlight across dark water.

Experience the sight. Feel the awe that comes from perceiving the sheer immensity of the expanse. Marvel at the serene joy of light amidst darkness.

Then imbed sight and intrepretation in language that evokes the musicality of that moment. Shape the images with simple description or nuanced metaphor. Let the enjoyment of the play of words come through, but ensure that it serves the story.

Then accent all of it with the conjoining of complementary images, so that the resultant haiku or tanka reinforces or complements the prose before it.

Savor the sensation that follows.

Crescent

moon-blown ripples

on evening tide

how a heaven-circling hope

comes from letting go

for Real Toads’ Poems in April – Photographic Images Reimagined (imagined by Margaret)

Poets United Poetry Pantry #478 (posted by Sherry Blue Sky)

#NaPoWriMo2019 / #GloPoWriMo2019 28/30

WD April PAD 2019 28/30

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25 responses to “To Write a #Haibun / #TankaProse: an #Ekphrastic #MetaPoem”

  1. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    This feels like living inside a poem.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    I love the “river of starlight”, truly an awesome sight. Such gorgeous images, the “moon-blown ripples” and the “heaven-circling hope.” Just beautiful, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sherry! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. Jules Avatar

    Minimalistic magic ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Jules Avatar

        Is there going to be a Sunday haikai? I went looking…

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      2. Jules Avatar

        Ok… there it is…
        ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar Avatar
    Margaret Elizabeth Bednar

    hope has never been more exquisitely expressed!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Margaret! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  5. coalblack Avatar

    Nice, Frank. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Shay! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  6. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is incredibly gorgeous, Frank! โค๏ธ I loved “A river of starlight across the black, the sparkles of starlight across dark water.” ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  7. ayala Avatar

    I love the images in this ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar

    I don’t know how you do this, but the prose section โ€“ while clearly and unequivocally prose โ€“ manages to have the force of poetry. (Whereas the philosophical tanka almost reads as prose.) !!!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you for your kind and insightful feedback, Rosemary! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. oldegg Avatar

    What a joy to read this is.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Leyda Bien Avatar

    Wow, Frank! Your tanka is so beautiful…love lines 2 and 4 especially.

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  11. Magaly Guerrero Avatar

    Clever prose, deliciously garnished with moon-ripples…

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Magaly! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  12. Vivian Zems Avatar

    You pulled me in with your words. A delicious prose and tanka. I’ve enjoyed reading your work this National Poetry Month ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Vivian! I’ve enjoyed reading yours, too! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Vivian Zems Avatar

        ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ

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