Peace: a #TankaProse

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A still pond. Canopies of maple, oak, white birch and pine reflect without blemish across it. Then the first drop falls. Ripples radiate out. More drops; more ripples, overlapping each other. The perfect reflection becomes a wavering array of verdant images twisted on an ever-trembling membrane. Soon, a blurry, raincloud gray is all the pond reflects. But before long, the rain slows. The last drops fall. The final ripple passes. Once more, a still pond.

morning coffee

forgotton in a flurry

of household errands

croaking frogs this evening

when the work is done at last

for the Tanka Poets on Site Facebook Group’s 5/18/19 Jerry muse (peace)

UPDATE: for Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Peace (posted by Susan)

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11 responses to “Peace: a #TankaProse”

  1. gillena cox Avatar
    gillena cox

    Home after the flurry of work and outside distractions is to many, the perfect peace

    Happy Wednesday

    Much๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ’–love

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  2. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    I can’t think of too many things more peaceful than a still pond.

    Like

  3. susanstoo Avatar

    Ah! Day like Lake, Lake like day–brilliant!

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  4. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    An evening listening to frogs sounds like perfect peace to me!

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  5. Sumana Roy Avatar

    So many images of peace. Beautiful.

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  6. Marja Avatar

    Love how the still pond changes into “wavering array of verdant images twisted on an ever-trembling membrane” and becomes still again

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  7. robtkistner Avatar

    Wonderful tanka-prose Frank!

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  8. Eileen T O'Neill Avatar

    Perfect peace within the circumstances of time and place..

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  9. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Wonderful image, Frank. What could be more peaceful than a still pond?

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  10. oldegg Avatar

    I think nature can always help out whether it be pond, trees clouds drifting across the sky all of which can calm you down to appreciate how beautiful life is.Grerat Tanka Frank.

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  11. Truedessa Avatar

    There is beauty in rain and the silence that follows. There is even an easiness listening to the croaking frogs in the evening.

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